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Old 10-16-2007, 03:10 PM
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May I suggest that the final draft should contain less specific requests at first. It's in danger of rambling. Five or six requirements, short and to the point. These five or six items can be expanded with greater detail within the document.

The reason for this is that non technical people will read this. If you want to get your message across you have to keep it simple. Then explain yourself to answer questions that your points raise.

Something like..

1 Dedicated Server software
2 Real time remote control
3 Content delivery system
4 ............
5 ........
6 ....

You get the idea, there are better people at writing than me in the gaming community...

Hit them hard with the simple facts when explain what those points mean.

PS I didn't think that point one would be needed until I bought Airborne...
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